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Re: where does everyone get there influences?
I get my influences to write from my trials, life's many blessings, and from my moral beliefs (in other words, my faith).
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Don't Let Go
Hello, thevoiceinside here :elephant: . . I was in Haiti a week before the earthquake. I was working in orphanages. When I heard the news of the quake, I was ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: It's Written In The Rain
It's Written In The Rain The cloud covered sky swallows the night. I see your face and you're holding me tight. The touch of your hand in mine, That's when ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: You're Someone To Me
Hello Fellow Writers :) I wrote this song just barely. I hope all of you realize who you are. -thevoiceinside --------------------------- You're Someone to Me Your eyes can't hide your ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
I just want to say first of all....Thank you!! to all of you :) I really appreciate it! I'm considering all of your suggestions and I'm so grateful to you ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: Kelsie's Song
Hey, thevoiceinside here -- I wrote this song for a dear friend. Kelsie has been there for me through it all. She brought me out of my deepest doubt. ------ ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: deleated
Hey Erica, The way I have it broken up is the way I would change it as far as formatting goes. It should be broken up into stanzas like how ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Lordgluzmans biography song (Rap)
hahaha *laughing hysterically* Wow, that was hilarious. The reviews on this are interesting :) So yeah Gluzman, my friend, nice work! I agree with Meep though, it doesn't say a ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: watching over me (?)
I really loved this. You did an awesome job with it. I agree with my friend Lordgluzman, I can't believe I'm only the 3rd one to review this! I love ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The Desert Needs The Rain
***Note: I've only edited this once Hey, thevoiceinside here :) I wrote this song for my brother who is serving an LDS mission. This song's tune is based off of ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: String Cheese
Hey! I thought your poem was brilliant!!! VERY VERY CREATIVE!! I'm now craving string cheese. In fact, I'm going to the store right now to get some :P This poem ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The universe on top of me
Wow...Krupp took the words right out of my mouth. Nicely done JustMe :) Keep writing like that and you'll be famous before you know it.
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Loneliness
Hello there, I thought your poem was brilliant. It portrayed excellent metaphors and I thought it captured the emotion very well. I know what it's like to be lonely. That's ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Impossible
Hey writers, This poem is something that i hope we can all believe in. Believe in something beyond yourself. -thevoiceinside ----- I'm possible An innocent thought; a hope to dream ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: When Truth Comes
Hey Anna, Truth is a potato: stubbornly ugly, waiting for someone to change its form. Many people aren't satisfied with a simple, lumpy root. To them Truth is something to ...
Mar 1, 2009
