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“Aaiden…” Sarah paused, “Aaiden Trai Hendricks! Answer me!” The quiet click of a bedroom door opening sounded from atop the stairs. A drowsy, sluggish expression caked Aaiden’s face. He st

Writers - This story has been a working piece for several years. Here is the beginning of a rough draft. -thevoiceinside Adiston Drive - Chapter One He stared blankly, watching ...

Thank you :) I appreciate your kind words

I would like to say thank you to everyone who has made a comment on my song. I would also like to thank everyone who posts a comment after this ...

Thanks to everyone who have replied :) TripleTravelTales, I cannot send you a private message because you've disabled that feature. If you allow it, than I'll surely let you in ...

Hello there :D I really liked this. It was great. Nice wording.

HEY HEY HEY HEY!!!! Long time, no talk. Hey dude, you got skillz for hard core rockin'. It's deep and has passion in it. But... :o why so dark?! It's ...

I disagree with Munchkinzizzles. It's for sure a song. I really like it. I think you could expand it and make it longer. Add more imagery, feeling, and add to ...

This song disgusts me. You're how old? 13? Yeah...completely inappropriate.

Owl City is an amazing band. This is similar to Owl City but not as good. I think you're trying too hard to copy them. You have a lot of ...

Hello Well first off, this is not written in a song format. It doesn't look or read like a song. There's no break up between verses and there's no chorus. ...

Wow, thank you so much everyone :) I wrote this at 4 a.m. this morning. I couldn't sleep. I was with my best friend (the guy in this song) till ...

This song is dedicated to my best friend. I've never stopped loving you... You're My Everything My jealousy is plain to see You're standing right in front of me But ...

I too thought it was a little rough. But very, very nice imagery for a first-timer ;) I wish someone would have told me the following when I first started ...

Hello, thevoiceinside here :elephant: . I was in Haiti a week before the earthquake. I was working in orphanages. When I heard the news of the quake, I was devastated. ...