thetraveler

Hey do you mind reviewing this poem I wrote? [url]viewtopic.php?f=196&t=92939[/url] Thanks! Cheers, thetraveler

Thanks so much! Quill I reviewed your poem... you have some talent!

Here I am as requested :) Wow... that is amazing poetry for starters. Well done! The first stanza is a little odd-sounding, the rhythm is slightly off, but all of ...

Jas I reviewed yours :) Getting around to others next Please excuse the fact that it may take a while... :)

Here I am because you asked :) I thank you for asking too... curbs the boredom pains I believe that your story (so far) is wonderful. The first sentance was ...

Hello everyone, Since I have joined this site, I have found that I prefer to review over writing. Generally I don't have a problem reviewing all kinds of work and ...

I think that diets should be balanced, but it is possible to do this as a vegetarian/vegan. My dad is a vegetarian, so I am a little biased, but there ...

Do you mind reviewing for me? Thanks :D I just want to know if you like it, what you like if anything, if you don't like it, what I could ...

Hey, here's a review for you, whether you want it or not... Wow, what a fun read! I really thought that you captured the feel of the tense air and ...

Hey, would you mind reviewing my poem, The Poets for me? Much appreciated, :D

Does anyone like this? What do you think about it? :?:

A poem is delicious Satisfying and nutritious To all whose attention is captured by thee. But do we think of who wrote it? No, no we just quote it And ...

If you want me to be entirely honest I thought that it was wonderful but it went a little fast. I don't know what story this is from but I ...