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Re: MTV Has Made Everyone Crazy
The age of television. OK Computer We've got the technology Who cares? Nevermind! Nowadays we need a thriller Fed up with heaven we need a nirvana ; A divine comedy ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: a broken blue
Thanks for the critique of my stuff. I agree with most of what has been said previously about this poem in part, but I don't like to be too critical ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Fly Away
Leave at midnight Vanish into the particles of the moon Soar above the moon; a divine metamorphosis Drop by the river Let it all go Buried in a river Deleted ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: Batteries (Life Gives Us Power)
Life is a battery. Most things need life to live, as many things need batteries for power. Speaking of power, just as batteries can give things an electronic charge, Life ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars Fanfiction Invasion of Solari Pt. 4
"All troopers board your transports!" echoed over the speakers three or four times, as hundreds of troopers boarded their ships, ready to land on Solari to secure the invasion. Among ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars Fanfiction Invasion of Solari Pt. 3
The previously burnt features of the Jedi had vanished, and after only a few minutes his face looked completely unscathed. As for the wound which went through his stomach, that ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: Back Porch Swing
:D Well done. Very poetic, kind of traditional in an old way, which (in contradictory terms) makes in fresh! Like many great songs and poems, it's simple- which is what ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: A Prologue of sorts?
Very well written. Good imagery and appropriately gripping cliff-hanger, which I'm sure everyone's been saying. Will there be a part 2? I hope so based on the fruits of this ...
Jul 27, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars Fanfiction Invasion of Solari Pt. 2
"CHARGE!" The depleted units of stormtroopers charged with a last valliant stand for glory, until he arrived. "For the Empire!" they shouted in unison, forming a blockade that smashed through ...
Jul 27, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars Fanfiction Invasion of Solari Pt. 1
"What is it?" Vader turned to see a rather nervous Commander Xeronium standing in front of him. His short figure seemed even smaller when compared to the Sith. "The offensive ...
Jul 27, 2007 -
Re: Hello : "What's with the Name and Who Am I?"
Who am I? The anonymous thinker, a philosopher, analyst, critic, and above all a writer. Somone whose daily life is surrounded (clouded, or indeed enhanced) by the power of thought, ...
Jul 26, 2007
