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Re: * bubble-gum flavored medicine
I've said this many times - just because a poem or song may not make sense or the reader cannot decipher the meaning doesn't make it a bad poem. Sometimes ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: * bubble-gum flavored medicine
This is good, really good. I think it's about pretending you're happy when you're really low. That's my interpretation anyway but it could mean something completely different. Enlighten us! Good ...
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: The Red Road Home
My friend Tempest (somewhere above) said I should check this out, and I was not disappointed :) Good description, dialogue - very clear portrait of events in my mind. One ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: What's so bad about Emo poetry?
I know there's a difference between sad, dark and emo. That's why it's annoying when some people just label you "emo" (I am not an emo and have nothing aginst ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Throw It Away/Do It Again
Nice. It's about a diary or journal, right? Moving onto the next entry, wanting a differnet past when you read it back and not being able to properly describe all ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: What's so bad about Emo poetry?
Yeah, I concur! Is it because it because we're all scared of sad people and that we're in denial, like nothing bad ever happened? Or is it because we don't ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Bloodly Mascara
Why is it that when anyone shows a bit of a sad emotion they get labelled an "emo"? I'm sick of it! Just because Insomniac's been showing a bit of ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Throw It Away/Do It Again
Done, done, onto the next one Because this one's the same one as the last A sad yearning for a different past Scribble it up, discard it, it's done Done, ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Untitled thoughts of a confused mind searching for answers
way to say the same old "I can't believe you left me". . Yes in a way, but this is in a context about death, not romance just to make ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Untitled thoughts of a confused mind searching for answers
Guess who's back? Haven't been here for a while Still focus, contemplating, thinking Further sinking into abyss Then climbing back on top of this Is this a circle, a cycle, ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: the girl who cried wolf
Hey. Good poem, though (probably missing something out which is blatantly obvious) I don't see a connection between title and actual poem. Please fill me in (despite the fact everyone ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Do TV and Movies Inspire your Writing?
Most of my fiction posts since I joined have been the Invasion of Solari saga which was set in between Star Wars episodes 4 and 5 but features characters that ...
Aug 13, 2007 -
Re: The questions of death.
I've replied via Private Message.
Aug 13, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars Fanfiction Invasion of Solari Pt. 5
Jens leapt over Vader with agility, pushing the dust into the air and with a scream focused on his opponent. It was as if there was nothing else but he ...
Aug 9, 2007 -
Re: thoughts of ten days.
I say this a lot when reviewing poetry but it doesn't necessarily have to make sense. I assume (correct me if I'm wrong) that the ? on the last line ...
Aug 9, 2007
