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I kind of like the mystery you placed in the poem. It give a sense of wonder. Anyway, I liked the poem although, it was kind of confusing.

I can see how Dyslexia ties into it and I like how you describe things. The only thing I saw was that my self should be myself. Do you actually ...

That's was really funny. I didn't finish it all though it was too long.

I thought it was somewhat corny. I think you should scap it and start over. Plus, think about what the people are saying doesn't it sound funny to you. And ...

How can I make it longer? Edited. Why can’t you see what you’re doing to me? Why can’t our love ever be? You reach for my heart and you tear ...

Not bad. I like the rhyming. Sorry, my reviews are quite dull today.

I like the use of imagery and the metaphors used. Good job.

It's true but I don't like the frequentness of you cannot.

Tell me what you think please. Stormy night. There's a crashing sound outside the window which gives us fear; it sounds like giants are jumping on the clouds. Also, a ...

So, I used to work for an online magazine and I happend to write an article for them but, I wasn't there long because my dad got sick. But here ...

I am plaing on making an online culture magazine and I am in need of a good layout for it. Credit for the picture will go to you and I'm ...

I think July first is Canada day. But, I'm not sure. I can ask the French students about France's independence day if you want. Independence days of other nations

I'm not so sure if I believe in that. There has been other stories about the end of the World that turned out to be about something totally different.

I think people are created equal. Although, I said that they weren't. Anway, think about it. Is a killer really equal to a nonkiller? The person killed someone but because ...

It seems to me that he or if god is a woman she wanted us to be more different from each other so, he or she gave us that liberty ...