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I thought that it was a good poem their was a sence of mystery trying to find out what she was doing and what was happending. It was quite sad ...

So, who wants to go first?

I think they should know manners just like in real life people hate jerks on the computer.

I had to read it two times to make sense of what you were saying. I kind of like how it's straightforward and you don't have to guess about what ...

I like the thought you put into this poem and the emotion that you carry with it. It really shows throughout the poem. I don't think I saw anything that ...

I find it interesting that you talk about how it's important to remain happy and to have hope even when things look bad it gives the poem or whatever you ...

It's done. Yay! One line taken form the Wizard of Oz. Brittney: “So, to tell you about myself. I am lyke so totally popular and I date lyke only the ...

Aah! Another 18 year old newbie. *Goes crazy trying to find out where all these 18 year olds are coming from* Anyway, welcome!

I don't understand where all these 18 year old males are coming from. Mainly the news ones. It makes it werider that I'm a 18 year old male also. There ...

How many reviews do you need to move up from Novelist. I saw someone with 26 reviews and they were one also so, I am wondering why I have almost ...

I would get rid of and I know I won't be whole without you. It doesn't really flow with a part for me a part for you. Maybe replace it ...

I'm not sure if I really like this it mainly just seems like a rant from a horse.

Sorry, I was editing it when you most have came into the forum, sorry.

So, here is a picture of the French students that were staying with us. Oliver (18) is on the right and Enzo (16) is on the left. And, that's me ...

Yeah, there are some errors in there like every one should be everyone and there's a place where you forgot to capitalize the I when referring to yourself. I think ...