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I thought it was quite good and it succeeds in giving us that sense of mystery. I do think that you should try a bit more to show us how ...

Thanks.

Could you please go there it's kind of a ghost town right now. Because, they just set up thier new website. Thanks. Anyway, I am currently, a contributor there incase ...

Your poem is quite funny Nate. lol

I know some people say yes and others say no. But, I don't know the evidence that well so, I want to see what you think.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! lol is fun to use. You can't make me restrain myself from using it. lol Oh, I just used it, lol and again. lol Aah! again. Okay, I'll stop. ...

I saw you one day and your profound beauty caught my eye. I want to be with you until the day that I die. I love the color of your ...

Wow, this really informs people about how bad animal abuse is. It was quite sad about what was happening to the puppy and you really explained about how the puppy ...

Didn't your mommy tell you not to play with fire. This is what happends. I'm gald you weren't hurt. And try to use common sense next time so you don't ...

I think this was quite good. I don't know how long you have been writing poetry for but the use of imagery here makes it seem like you really understand ...

I think insted talk about them emotions you go through when having someone cheat on you. Show us it makes you feel. I beleive that good poems gives us emotions ...

I liked the ryming. The only thing is that I think it coud use more detail. Sorry, that's about all I have to say for this. Also, I not sure ...

I kind of like this and how it's when you grow older you sometimes forget about the past. The only thing is that the past makes the future so it's ...

Discrimination. Why can’t you understand that we most live hand in hand? Why is it that you hate? How does that do any good to our fate? Why must there ...

I like this poem because I can relate to it; people are always bullying me and they think they are so much better than me. But, I can never see ...