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We have a lot of illegal immigration from the Spanish countries. I think sense these people are not committing any more crimes in America that they should be allowed to ...

Please read the warning because I don't want to see anything bad happen. Most people that read it thought it was really funny but because of the stupidity in it ...

I thought it was good but, it could use more detail and Hell should be capitalized because it's a place.

I thought it was good, but, I wasn't able to finish it.

I thought it was good. Some things we capitalized, and, I don’t know if they should have been :D

Thanks for reviewing. I will try to make the conversations more interesting. And, I will get rid of the Italian. Do you have any ideas on how to make the ...

Hello. You will find that most people here are very nice and would like to see you write something interesting. Anyway, welcome.

I just edited it. Depression happens for many different reasons; for example, loss of a job our being bullied. Depression does not only affect the person with the depression but, ...

Just to let you know it's not done yet. Victor loses his job. The boss is sitting in a leather chair in his office when he calls Victor into his ...

Yeah, I don't like smoking either.

I had it set up as a play so, I thought that was how to write it but thanks anyway.

I think he was just being a smart butt. When people act stupid it is annoying.

What do you think is the most important issue that we should deal with?

maim? I think you should capitalize your I's.

Warning! Some of these things you shouldn’t do because, they’re prohibited by law and some, of them involve, harming yourself and others. I strongly advise, you not to do these ...