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It does seem cool though.

There might be a few grammar mistakes but I tried to edit it. You make me sad. You make me mad. You make me cry. You make me want to ...

Yay! I actually finished reading a long story. Usually my ADD prevents that. Anyway, is there more to this? Because I would like to read. I like how you picked ...

Fire, that's better than what I could do. lol Oh, now I have an idea.

I need spys for something. All it will do is increase my dominion without hurting anyone else. If it hurt people I won't be doing it. PM me for detals. ...

Yeah, there were some grammar errors in this. I think the idea of using Microsoft Office Word will help you with Grammar and Spelling sense, it has Grammar and Spelling ...

:smt089 That was quite depressing. I think there was only one thing I would change but otherwise it was good.

I thought it was interesting how it gives a sense of mistery.

:smt089 That's about all I can say.

Did this really happen to you? At my school I felt like an outcast also. All my friends were drugies. Although, I wasn't. But, perhaps, 90% of the school were ...

Is this a place for weridos to get together or something?

Yay! I actually understood what this poem was about. I can't say that for some poems. Anyway, I liked it.

Your English is quite good. You do have a few grammar errors though. I suggest that you have someone edit it before posting. Plus, that will help with your English ...

It's sad that that kind of thing does happen in life. I thought the poem was interesting and it makes people awear that there is evil in this world and ...

Space that was just rude. Sorry I didn't really read this yet.