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You could really feel the emotion in it. Nice job.

I can feel some of the hate but I think it would be better if you showed us why you are so repuled by yourself. Why does thee hate yourself ...

Thanks for your reviews.

Let me know if it's any good. I added more metaphors and vocabulary. Plus, I edited it. You’re like a tyrant. Don’t you have anything better to do? You crush ...

Scraped. Sorry.

I just noticed that I'm the only guy that read this so far. lol Anyway, it was interesting about the popular guy falls for the nerdy girl. I think you ...

Well, it does seems that some guys are like that but some like the personality that people have. Anyway, it was nice poem. And, I hope you find someone some ...

I found this be a interesting poem. Plus, it seems that you picked to talk about something people usually don't write about making it more interesting.

This poem of your seems to better than the other ones I read and I can relate to it. You should probably capiltilize the I's though.

I'm not sure what to make of this. I mean what's the direction you're trying to go? I understand the message. But, what's the point?

I need writers and editors of certain sections of the magazine. Plus, this is a great oppurtunity to see your work published and to work for a magazine. The magazine ...

Thanks Jabby.

I thought it was okay not the best I've seen though. It needs more detail and emotion. Plus, what's the point of this? I think it would be better if ...

Well, I don't usually write poetry but I thought I should try it. Just one question. Should I keep the commas? The plant; it waits to photosynthesize. So, it can ...

I never knew you were gansta. :smt005 Anyway, that was a cool song.