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I think it is quite weird because with within American English there are different dialects like Country, Northern, Urban, and Suburban. I know that from studying linguistics and talking to ...

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I was working with style maker for Vmtv clothes a 3d world thing so, I download a program demo to see if that would me with it. Anyway, it didn't ...

Oh, just to let you know I believe the rules are that you need to make two reviews for every story you post. Anyway, your poem did turn out well ...

There wasn't really much action and it was kind of short. I think you should add more.

Interesting.

This is my frist Rap. Remember that it's made up. Verse one. Yo, I got some hunnies which happen to be some playboy bunnies. Ya know I’m a player; I’ve ...

I am so sorry that this happened to you. Ray was a horrible person to have done that. My friend said that he suffered some sexual abuse at school also. ...

Damn! That was good, I usually don't see stories that make that much of an impact on people. I like the girl finally found love. I think you should write ...

It reminds me of the school shootings. You seemed to use some words to frequently. Plus, it seemed kid of emtionless. But, it did leave people thinking although, I'm, not ...

Well, you feel the emotion in this one and I feel that it left an impact. Nice Job.

I don't think there is enough detail in this to be a poem. Plus, it needs more words. I would scarp it. Sorry.

It was quite nice, I liked the ryming and it does bring out your emotion. Nice Job.

Why can’t you see that you are indispensable to me? Why most you cry and want to live in the sky? The amount of your tears is equal to that ...

I would go back and edit it. Also, I think this would be rated R or at lest pg-13 due to the nudity and sex in it. I also don't ...