thestorygirl

It was a very good post. Now I will help you with the dialogue. Instead of tutting disapprovingly she should frown unhappily. Alexis tuts disapprovingly. You should say something that ...

It took me a while to catch on but it definetly was well written. I like how different she is and how well decripted he is. There were few grammatical ...

It's really funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But while I was rolling on the ground lauphing and reading(by the way not a good combination) I read when SM came it sort of mad the ...

It wasa overall very good plot with few grammatical errors that where they were did not take away from the plot. the grammatical errors were with puncuation mostly. add more ...

This is the concept of how people feel when they find out they're being cheated on. :pirate2: You took my hand, and led me through the mourning night. I stumbled ...