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Re: Fury
I like it and it sounds a little like me with the clique girls in my school. Except I have lashed out and reduced them to suddering, evil, goose-pulp. that ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Herp Derp Review and Shoe Emporium (Closed)
Look up Hunted by thestorygirl. I dont care if you call me dumb and say it was badly excecuted just give me some CC please!!!!!!!!
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Voices
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for the text thingy there I couldnt help myself. This is something that I actually have going on inside my had at certain times, no I am not ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Hope
I like it A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!! The new peice was very detailed. I could almost taste what she was going to say. Literally this poem was delicious. I have wierd word ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Beauty
This was a very good poem. It was beautifully written and seemed to have a meaning that I couldn't quite get. But it was really really really really really good ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Hunted Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first story so excuse my absolute horrible punctuation. My punctuation is like a pirate :pirate2: arg!! That was weird. By the way if you don't ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
This is a really good and very funny actually. Did this really happen? If it did i might have to lauph. there werent a lot of errors. actually there werent ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Eaglefeather's Path (Prologue-- REWRITE)
Not that bad honestly. I myself am a big warriors fan. It's very intrueging. write more please there isnt much else to say. this was an amazing fanfiction. not many ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Rahiem: Prologue
Hi Bladesmith. that was really good and captured my intrest. you should try to use the tab button, but if your tab thing is all funky with this website (like ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Plant Photos of Vivarium Today!
so pretty 1 The first one was bright and focused. 2 The second one notging caught my eye. 3 the third was blurry but had vibrant colors. all in all, ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter of Nightingale
just to let you know all of the punctuation mistakes i take full credit for im horrible with puntuation. spelling mistakes is because i have a new computer and the ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter of Nightingale
This is in the form of a movie. :smt001 This will be a little long so hang in there. [just to let you know time at night is when the ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
He would Explode like "BWOOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and then Daimien would walk over to the nerdy computer dude and go "what was that for?" and Daymien would look up and say "Spongebob ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Kissing Cliff
Thanks for the critism (did I spell that right?) I always have that problem and I'm working on it. Anyway happy Martin Luther King Jr. DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Im Going To Hell
You scared me so bad. Now I'm gonna have nightmares. Thanx. But it was really good and well written.
Jan 16, 2011
