thestorygirl

Graphic novels are hard to do but you pulled it off excellently

I like how you could see the brush strokes and the colors were so vibrant and bright

It was enchanting and dark and caught my aye because of it's abnormalty.

yes this is a common but easily unique topic. You expressed the feeling an emotions well. It was vague but just informant enough that it could be alluring, facinating, even ...

I see what you were going for but the wedding seems to rushed. For One, Peeta doesn't speak AT HIS OWN WEDDING! There isn't much emotion behind the characters. Yeah ...

And I just wrote Bleed for the heck of it

Recoil is from my point of veiw.

Actually this is from a guys point of veiw. Not mine.

Thanx Coral, Snickerdooly, and TDMitchell. I know my rhyming is really bad. Never tried it so it explains why I'm so horribly bad with it. Anyway, I'll probobly do a ...

reveiw please. its poetry. I dont care if its not your strong point. Help please.

The day of the burning, the night of the flood. I was hidden in a chamber, his name was Mudd. Overthrown, my heart was gone. I waited for the new ...

I like it a lot. It was dark and very honest. It didn't hide itself like a lot of poems do with it's topics. It was straight forward and beautifully ...

Wow is probably the only word low enough to describe this. The highest word hasn't even been invented yet do I will invent it. The word is Fantabulisticatomicamazing . See ...

I like it a lot. I know how you\character feels. Actually I'm feeling that way right now. *Dreamily sighs* Dylan... Anyway just want to tell you I love it and ...

Whoah. I love your stuff. It rymed and was pretty. I normally hate ryming poems but I actually likes this one