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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Haunting

    I'm not one for poems like these, but I liked this one. It was captivating - like honey in a jar (hehehe)- I liked it a lot, I would give ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Thank You

    You opened my eyes, to bright daytime filtering through the murky water. It took my eyes a moment to adjust, precious time wasted on empty things. When my eyes adjusted ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Archive Re: Camp Half-Blood *Join!*

    Auburn I run away from Katherine when I see one of her sisters coming towards her. Not wanting to spark any questions on why I was near a girl I ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Cutter's Fate

    What else can I say? This was fabulous. Every stanza just poured a story. Unlike a lot of the other people here I thought there was a lot of emotion. ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Archive Re: Camp Half-Blood *Join!*

    Auburn - Hephestaus I was shocked by Hestia's announcement. He was closer then you think, what was that supposed to mean? That I was standing on him? As I walk ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Bad Experiment

    If your going to write a poem, you might as well take care to write the poem. I thought it lacked volume, potential, any other language except French and English, ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Archive Re: Camp Half-Blood *Join!*

    Auburn I brush my damp hair over my shoulder, my wet hair flopping lazily onto my back. Why did this stupid cabin have to be so dang hot? I study ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Light and dark.

    Dang!! This is some heavy stuff. Definetly confusing, but still intreaging. Contrast light when darkness falls. Kind of confusing, but I get the message. The sun rest upon the sea, ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Guard

    What can I say? This was absolutely fabulous. The way this was written, there was just something about it, it was like poetry. The way it flowed, it was perfect ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Information Desk Re: Internet Safety

    Yeah. I go on this site called because I love fashion ( yeah I'm an obsessed freak). This creepy stalker person asked for my name, so I reported s/he aand ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Reformat (started, accepting)

    Name- Ellie Graz Age- 12 Appearance- 5 6" and wire thin. An extremely fast runner and also has a amazing reaction time. She has long black hair and purplish eyes. ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Cyborg

    What can I say? It was sort of eclectic, and about as original as you can get. Seriously, this was one freakin' awesome poem. Was it a poem? I don't ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    The Westing Game. If you ever see it on the shelf at your library, follow these life-saving instructions. Instructions 1. Run away screaming and sue the library for owning that ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Any good books I can try?

    Yeah, I'm like you too. When I was in 1st grade I had read every Harry Potter book that was out at the time. Now I can read adult books ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: Race of the Benders

    Name- Rakeza Side- Bad Age- 11. The youngest of everyone on either of the sides. Nationality- Earth. Personality- Strong-willed and stubborn. She is kind to all that believe she is ...

    Mar 5, 2011


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