thestorygirl

I assume that since you're reading this that you are interested. Well, then here we go. The year is 3000. Everything was alright, happy even, until a strange disease spread ...

Is my character okay, because I can tweak her. :D

Interesting. Definetly well written, but sort of confusing. You could have added more detail. Yes, there was a lot of similes. It did help with my veiwing of what you ...

Another thing. You should add more emotion because it would help me understand how to know who you are. What your different perspective on things is is very helpful in ...

This is definettly something you don't see often. But you should have added stanzas. It is easier on the eyes. The sun suffocates me and the still water crushes, as ...

It's very good but one thing. I walked along a cold lit night, Brushing slowly against green cracked life. My heart beat against the Moon, And the Sun showed his ...

I really enjoyed but just one thing. The tears are well hidden behind my eyes, a smile is forever stained on my face. But something hides in the dark of ...

Well isn't that just relatable. If this is how you feel a lot, I'm with you sister. I don't really have anything to say but there is a few things ...

Name- The Angel Age- Since the Beginning Alice Descendant or Dwellar- Dweller Appearance- She is all white. Has a beautiful face and wings. Her skin is black as night and ...

Name- Alyssa Monroe Jones Age- 20 1/2 But she is still pretty mature. Race- Human Home Realm- Earth Appearance- She is about 5'7" with small hips and an even smaller ...

Name- Constalia Xinjaii Gender- Girl Age- 19 Group- Dawn Personality- Alone and solitary. She craves to be near people but she doesn't really know how to talk to people. She ...

Name- Mary-Stuart ( yes that is actually my real name. I have a family name.) Gender- Girl Star SIgn- Cancer ( my star sign is a disease... aww.. how fitting.) ...

Blossom Quitseli was not the most normal of people. From her waist length red and green streaked whitish-blonde hair to her abnormally large blue glasses, she was quirky. I guess ...

At the hollow globe Two left for eternity Just one left to die I wanted a Haiku for my collection. :smt003

Auburn A scream wakes me from my sleep, a girl's scream. I throw on my jacket and run into the camp. The scream came from the practice arena, someone must ...