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I definitely liked this poem. It was complete, it followed your meter, it had a tangible story line and the rhymes worked well and held together thematically. A lot of ...

We are the helpless generation. Plagued by apathy and expectation, as we grow tired from staring listlessly at hollow relationships. White and blue, wasting time. We feel independent but fall ...

I really enjoyed this piece. It was empowering, and the use of a storm as a metaphor was striking and it definitely accomplished its goal. I have recently been exposed ...

Well, thank you both for the feedback. The proper punctuation is always an issue for me, I can never seem to get past those tricky commas. As far as the ...

This was phenomenal, I love how the build up to the ending. It was so dark and held death as a theme but then culminating in love that could not ...

If I could find the brightest morning, I would keep it in a bottle So maybe someday I could inject it Into my bloodstream. Let it pump my heart like ...

In response to the seating position, the back of the bus is sort of L shaped, so even though they were physically behind in terms of the bus I could ...

Yeah that's more of a working title. I'm still trying to find something decent for it

I definitely relate to the anger in the piece. I love angry poetry in part because it is the most raw form and because I find I do my best ...

Write a poem about the color of the inside of your eyelids

Over all I thought it was decent. I liked the contrast of the italicized bits that helped add to the narrative nature of the piece. I did not like, however ...

I sit with the colored people toward the back, on seats that are way too busy and smell of nicotine and cheap detergent. I keep to myself and only make ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was beautiful in its simplicity and matter-of-factness, it was this short little nugget that encapsulates so much of what poetry is. I can't find ...

Though I write it, I do not tend to gravitate toward reading depressed poetry (after all one can only take so much right?) but I am really glad that I ...

Well, although I'm not entirely sure how all this works. I figured why not sound my barbaric yawp, so, hello.