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Re: Social Life
i havent imitated a gossip girl novel i have made a story in the style i dont know what you call it the genre say in no way have i ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Social Life
Social Life Chapter 2 Bridget was running late after last nights activities with Brett, she felt so messed up. She pulled on her comfiest jeans, a loose vest and a ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Heart Strings
hi im gonna try and review your song im not that good sorryy Your smile fades into a frown Her eyes are turned down - i think this line should ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Social Life
hi thanks for the feedback i've made a few changes to peace.love.and.music.013 you said "Overall, this reads a bit like porn" that s not what i intended . I intended ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Love Note
i think this is really creative i thought it was a proffesional photo i would have made the envelope more noticeable and recognisable it must have been very hard to ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Social Life
Social Life Chapter 1 Brett stared over at Bridget as she sat on the end of his bed. She was so sexy, yet casual, as if she didn't even try. ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye my friend
i think this is really good with some good editing and music it could be a good ballad type song I was there, to love you lots. I’ve done my ...
Jul 22, 2009
