theraven13

Beneath the gate of shadows lives a man who was left with only the fires of Hell to warm him. Dejected even by the devil himself. The angels beg for ...

Thanks for the criticism. The probably wasn't the best poem to post first. I understand what your saying competely. This wasn't a sit dow and write for other people to ...

I loved this part: I lie wounded Life's blood slowly slipping away You held that knife The one lodged in my heart You laughed And left me to die alone ...

It was really good, especially for your first poem. I loved the ending Death is a concept, It is a choice, My choice, And I will live. very passionate.

I wrote this out of passion, but I'm not suicidle myself. Don't worry. On the first page of her book she wrote “once upon the time” On the second page ...

That was lovely. Really... symbolic. The kind of thing I love. But I think that "You know where's fire" kind of screws up the rhythem. You don't have to be ...

That was really good. It was romatic and sexy. I love guitarists.