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Re: Forgotten Ones #2
thepolarbearleague here to write a review This is a great story. Here are somethings that i think that you should fix The first quote, you forgot to put a quotation ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Into the Dawn
Hey this is thepolarbearleague here for a review. I think this story is great. You know, I think that if you added more this could be a book. The plot ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Humphrey
Hello JKHatt! This is thepolarbearleague here for a review. First of all I wanted to say that I really liked this story. Second I wanted to tell you what i ...
Feb 5, 2015 -
Re: Fireworks Instead of Thoughts
Hey. this is thepolarbearleague here to write a review. First of all this is a great story. I absolutely loved it. Second, i wanted to point out some things that ...
Feb 5, 2015 -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
Hey! This is thepolarbearleague here to write a review. First of all, I think that this is a great story. Second, the only thing that I saw was when you ...
Feb 5, 2015