theotherone

Spot is reserved for the rest of my review. :) -Other One

I'm here again! :P So I've got a few nitpicks, but I won't write my overall impression, since I've already said it. I had been staying with Aimee for the ...

Aw yes... I know what you all mean about the suicide thing... It's actually missing a part, but I couldn't phrase it well so I just went and didn't write ...

Okay, you just have to "submit your work" and post it, when your finished, it will automatically send you to the post, right? At the top, where it normally says ...

The werewolves weren't just thrown in there. It's part of the whole story... You're not far enough to truly understand what is the impact. I'm sorry to leave you hanging ...

Hey guys! Sierra: Thank you so much for reading. Like I always say: it means a lot too me. (it I repeat it all the time, it's because it's true, ...

I'm back! Chapter two... Much better for the confusion. Names help. ;) You do seem to have the grammar part under control. I don't see any mistakes, but again I'm ...

Okay, first, I would like to clear some things up. Since it's for English, I had to write a story from 2 to 4 pages, and believe me this is ...

Thanks everyone for your help! Truth: I know what you mean about the length and I changed it for two chapters instead of three... I am aware that it's still ...