theotherone

Hello there. :) You asked me a while ago to review this... And I'm sorry it took so long to finally do, but my life is a mess right now, ...

Hello there. :) I thought this story was funny, and really good if you consider you only had 150 words. Not much details, but who cares! The way you've written ...

Nate pushed open the double doors, making us fall into silence. There was something about him that made me shut up and listen every time he entered a room, like ...

Hello Faith! I'm glad to see that you have found your way into this site... It's really amazing, and I believe you are going to like it here. :) I ...

Hello there. :) A bag of grapes laid untouched in my lunch box and I gave the cookies in my hand a serious look. No kiddin! I wish I had ...

Hello there. :) Architecture, Music, and Cooking were Him’s Previous jobs. The use of Him is really weird here. It took me a while to realize what you were trying ...

Hello there. :) I really like this picture, mainly because it speaks to me... Yes, it whispers in my ear. ;) I like the fact that it's in macro, so ...

Hello there. :) I'm going to focus strictly to the photo and the techniques, and not the model, which is you. I do not like the fact that the face ...

Hello there. :) First photo: I like the idea you had for this. It's really cool and funky, and it took me a while to understand why we couldn't see ...

Hello there. :) It was never cloudy when they were next to each other. It might have got rainy or a little bit cold but never grey. She always loved ...

Hello there. :) Whatever he said, she looked over her shoulder to see me there. This sentence doesn't quiet make sense. Maybe try: She didn't hear whatever he had said, ...

Hello there. :) I'm here again for another review! When he saw me looking comma, he glanced away again but I couldn’t ignore the expectant smile on his face. “The ...

Hey there Anna! So, I'm finally here... Sorry for all of the delay, just got my wisdom teeth pulled out, and well... I wasn't in the mood. :) “I didn’t ...

Hey Dudette! I'm so sorry it took me this long to get to this... Life is a little bit packed for me lately, and well now that I'm pretty much ...

My emotion is rage. The song I used was 'If you think this song is about you, it probably is' by D.R.U.G.S... Here are the lyrics. So hence, you left ...