theotherone

Hey Truth! So... This reminds me of something. ;) I really like the composition, and the meaning, although it is a little bit confusing at some point. I get how ...

Hi there, First off, I just want t o say that these drawings are pretty good, you do seem a little bit rusted, but honestly, I'm impressed to see you ...

It's me again! :) First off, I love the contrast between the metal pieces and the glass... Pretty intense. Secondly, I love the lighting. Again, the contrast is great, between ...

hi there! I can't see anything either... But I would love too! Maybe try to do it again? I don't know, it's just an idea. :) -Other One

This is always a great subject to write about. It happens to everyone, and therefore, we can pretty much all relate to it easily. Overall, I like it. You could ...

Hi there! :) I love, love, love, love this! You write beautifully, and although it is a little bit confusing and it is vague, that is the beauty of poetry, ...

Thanks everyone for your help! Truth: I know what you mean about the length and I changed it for two chapters instead of three... I am aware that it's still ...

Hi Pink. :) Everyone pretty much did all the mistakes I noticed, except for one. “Hunter has had a crush on her since freshman year. He never told me or ...

Hi stargazer9927! For my review, I'll begin with the nitpicks and then with the overall impression, okay? "It's an hour before and you're just barley barely telling me now?" "Well ...

Hi there :) So I think you know how I do my reviews, right? Grammar first, then little tips, and keep the best for last, the overall impression! So I'll ...

Hi there, I'm going to do a little nitpicks, first and then we shall go with the overall impression, alright? 'I''m very sorry.' He said. 'I should have watched where ...

Hi there, The grammar seems pretty fine, except for the occasional typo's. There were three cars in the driveway of the house of my destination, the mix of shadow s ...

Chapter 2 The week passed in a blur and I couldn’t believe that it was finally Friday. And it wasn’t a plain Friday. It was the day that I was ...

Hi there, Liz bit back the scream that she had been about to release, not wanting to give him the satisfaction that he craved. “I want you to call my ...

This story will never change. Searching the world for this feeling. Hurting, shards of my broken heart, Falling through the empty void. This story will be the same. Searching relentlessly, ...