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Hello there. :) I think everyone already did every mistakes I could find, so let's move on with the story! It was beautifully written, like always. You've got a way ...

Hello there. :) 1. People making out! Don't worry, I do that too... I love it by the way. At first glance, I thought this was going to be bad. ...

*Speechless* (not even a hello.) These are amazing . If this is old stuff, what is your new stuff? I'm curious to see. 1. I love the way you blend ...

Here for a final review! For the nitpicks, Navita pretty much did them all, so I'm going to stay clear of them this time. The end of the story was... ...

Hi again. :) “Are those them?” This sentence is a little bit confusing. Are these your shoes? is maybe a more suitable sentence. That's pretty much it, everyone else did ...

Hi there, I'm here again for another review. :) She feels stupid for leaving her shoes, but she has nowhere to go, so she doesn't worry about it too much. ...

The werewolves weren't just thrown in there. It's part of the whole story... You're not far enough to truly understand what is the impact. I'm sorry to leave you hanging ...

Hi there. :) She loves art and aspires to go to art school even though her meddlesome Aunt and Uncle don’t approve . T hey think everything should be logical ...

Hi there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks, and then I'll go on with the overall impression. "Hey Ives , " He smiled . "Hey Tristan , " I laughed ...

Hi there. :) I didn't see any mistakes, congratulations! But the story... It's a little cliche, I can't lie. The little you've post is not enough to have a good ...

Here for another chapter! I would like a full review, because I kind of need to know if my story is going in the right direction. But please, don't be ...

Hey guys! Sierra: Thank you so much for reading. Like I always say: it means a lot too me. (it I repeat it all the time, it's because it's true, ...

Hi there. :) Great drawings. I love the lines on there... Such aggressive lines for something to soft and beautiful. Love the contrast. ;) You should definitely find a way ...

Hi there. :) This was well written. Not the best technical, but we could pretty much all relate to this, and that was exactly your point, I presume. By looking ...

I'm back! Chapter two... Much better for the confusion. Names help. ;) You do seem to have the grammar part under control. I don't see any mistakes, but again I'm ...