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Hello there. :) This is pretty good. You seem to have to base of the muscular structure under control. You're on a good way! I don't have anything to say ...

Hello there. :) Okay, so I corrected all your mistakes, but then my computer shut down, and I don't want to make any full review again... So I'm going to ...

Hello there. :) This is a nice drawing, good job with that! I'm not a fan of mangas, but I don't hate them either. I'm more of a realistic drawing ...

Hello there. :) So, first we the nitpicks, and after I'll give you the overall impression, does that work? I shall begin. :) Rachel, Rach for short, has been my ...

Hello there. :) Fifteen minutes later, she had put on bronze and gold eye shadow, brown-black mascara, black eyeliner, and pink gloss and was putting my blond hair in two ...

Hello there. :) So this was good. A subject writers write a lot about it, but you can't really go wrong with it since pretty much everyone can relate to ...

Hello there. :) I was expecting him home an hour ago , his tea’s getting cold. I think this is everything I could fine. Good job with the writing part, ...

Hello there again. :) Funny, kind ; to her friends and to strangers, and she was even pretty strong. Her green eyes locked on mine, and then she smile d ...

Hello there! :) Just reading the synopsis made me want to read more, so let's hope this is better than I wished for. I'm going to make some nitpicks... If ...

Hello there. :) I have to agree with WickedWonder and Zekkie876... This is confusing. I didn't really get it. The lights are lucid today . Under the canopy, the lights ...

Hello there. :) Okay, so I really like the emotions that are captured in the eyes. I don't know if it's what you were trying to do, but she seems ...

Hello there. :) This is good, even though they are really alike. Cliche is good. ;) You've got the eye for that sort of thing, believe me. The only thing ...

Hey there. :) I know it's been a while you posted this, but I'm still going to review. ;) I looked back at him, he was laughing his head of ...

Chapter 6 I was sitting on the stairs to my basement, watching a bunch of teenagers dancing. I could easily see Liam sandwiched between two beautiful girls. He looked distracted ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with the overall impression. This has been going on for weeks! Where is this going, space here If ...