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Re: Alive
Hello there. :) This is really short, and I think you could really write more on this topic than you actually do. Like writing a flash back to an actual ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Natasha's Chapter
Hello there. :) First off, I want you to say to your friend that she writes beautifully. I don't think I have any nitpicks for this, and everything was close ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Idea!!
Hello there. :) I was just going to review, but then I saw that you only did two reviews in more than a year... The whole point of this site ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Hello there. :) The first thing I have to say is that I agree with the other people who have reviewed this. You seem to be giving us an awful ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Blue
Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. The silverware , which had been passed down to Lisa from her great-grandmother and ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
Hello there. :) Whoa, this is a lot of pictures... I'll go one by one, and tell you what I think. 1. I kind of like this one, but it ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Shaking off dew-drops
Hello there. :) These pictures are pretty good. My favorite would probably be the second one, because of the colors. I don't think I have anything to say really apart ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Heart Saga : Hidden - Prologue
Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with the overall impression. A fight they have already lost, They had? I'm not sure if this is ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Black and white paintings
Hello everyone! This is some of my newest work. Hope you all enjoy it, and don't hesitate to tear it apart. :) Thank you in advance. This is a painting ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Almost
Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. She poured herself a glass of water and slowly sipped at it. I think ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Journey: Tears- Chapter 1
Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. Crying over the man that had ruined my life seemed incredibly stupid but yet ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Love's Mysterious Ways Pt. VI
Hello Alpha, here again to review. :) “I came back from the bathroom and this girl was all over him , so I freaked out and ran.” Occupying my bench ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Craved [1]
Hey there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. How many times have I ran down this trail? Too many times to count, ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: It begins with a pencil and white paper.
Hello everyone, and thanks for the reviews! Yes, I am aware that the last drawing has its problems... Now. ;) But I can't really work on it though. I'll keep ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Opportunities
Hello Paper. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks, and then move on with my overall impression of the story. My eye for detail is second-to-none and the window displays I ...
Nov 7, 2010
