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Re: Untitled Chapter 2
Hello there. :) I went to my room and listened to my Ipod as I did my homework. Jonas Brothers started blasting from my speakers. I also like The All-American ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: My Pets
Hello :) These are awesome sketches. 1- I've got nothing to say... Pretty well done. And they are so cute. 2- This one is pretty good as well, but I ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Some Stuff
Hello there. :) Yes, these are fairly over sized, and it's really difficult to review when we don't see all of it at the same time. This link will bring ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Golden Wings- chapter 8
Hello Twinnette :) I just came here to congratulate your friend here, Kaylee? “I’ll go shower, before it gets crowded comma, ” I said, turning away “Hum comma, no thanks. ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Olivia and Stephen: Chapters 1 and 2
Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks, hope you don't mind! :) How many moments in your life can you say, "This is where it all changed" ? F ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 8 (part 1)
When I got out of bed the next morning and caught a glimpse of myself in the mirror, I stopped before it to look at my reflection more closely. My ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Lie To Me~2
Hello. :) I have some nitpicks again... It might be just me being over the top though. My parents hadn’t yet returned home when I got home. The repetition of ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Lie To Me~1
Hello there. :) I'll start with the nitpicks. What can I say, I'm a nitpicker. :) His voice was full and reassured in himself , “you are really good.” His ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: A Dragon and Tiger
Hello. :) Wow, these look fantastic. I love the tiger better, because there's more black. :) I think you should put his nose black? Just an idea. And I think ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Missing You
Hello. :) I have a few nitpicks for you. I love it when you do that. Or at least I did. "you did that?" I'm not sure if it's better ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Alice in Wonderland--uncoloured illustration
Hello :) Definitely color it! I can't see much, because it's so pale, but once it's colored... It's going to be great! The second part, however... I can't see much. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The Moth and the Flame, a Tragedy
Hello there! :) I don't have any nitpicks for you, I'm so sorry... It's really rare I don't give some, but to be frank, I didn't even scan for them, ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Butterfly (Spin off from "I Love You")
Hello there. :) “Come on, I’ll show you around. They’re both at work,” he said as he lead me inside. He kissed at my skin, where my neck connected to ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Can they be changed?
What your are saying is inspiring, but I personally think that we can't change other people, just ourselves. But by changing your ways, you can influence others to do that ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Crumbled (Into Place)
Hello there. :) Down by the train tracks it was silent . Silently , I exhaled seeing my foggy breath in the chilly night. You repeated Silent two times... You ...
Jan 5, 2011
