theotherone

This is my first attempt at photography, so please be gentle... Well actually, no, it's fine, I can handle it. :) I edited them slightly and I KNOW they are ...

Hello there. :) Another chapter! Yay! :) But when I stood up and looked around comma I saw that something was wrong. Just like the dream I had had the ...

Hey twinnette. ;) I didn't want to be the first review, but every time I wait for someone to review first, I forget... So here I am! even though you might ...

I know it's long, but please bear with me... It's rated sixteen for the slight swearing. Like I said before, it's part of the story. I didn’t have the chance ...

Hello there. :) A few nitpicks for you. ;) My brother in particular seemed to be cozying up to Logan's colleague, Dr. Rita. She was the woman who had done ...

Hello there. :) Wow, impressive story. I love it! It makes me think about myself a lot. I use to fall asleep at night thinking about a guy that I ...

Hello there. :) Corrections in red, comments are in bold. I couldn't hear myself think over the pounding of the bar's loud obnoxious oldies, men and women both droning on ...

Hello there. :) First off, I like the angle. It shows goes well with the trees somehow. :) Now, I see that a lot of people think you did just ...

Hello there. :) 1. This one, I have to say I was a little bit confused for the first few seconds because the two sides are not the same color, ...

Hello there. :) First: RE-SIZE! These photos are humongous, and I don't want to review them because I can't even see it as a whole... Here are some links where ...

Hello there. :) Just the feel of his lips pressed against hers, his hand roaming across her stomach, his tongue just barely grazing the inside of her mouth, exploring what ...

Hello there. :) Corrections are in red, comments in bold. Authors note: It is a bit short, so if you find parts where description is needed please let me know, ...

Hello there. :) This is going to be a short review, so sorry for that! So let's go on with it then. :) The drawing is great, and I love ...

Hello there. :) Really want something to review? Well... I've got some things... ;) Chapter 8 of my romantic novel, Take A Chance. I don't know if it's because it's ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with some nitpicks. Don't worry, it's just little typos. :) If I could only hold you in my arms one last time. I didn't care ...