theotherone

“She chose me, so you better back off,” Cole whispered harshly. His face was close and I could clearly smell the hint of mint on his breath. He was way ...

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Hello, I'm here to review as requested. :) I said in my thread that I wasn't too good at reviewing poems... And I meant it. But I'll do my best ...

Hello :) I saw a few mistakes when I read the chapter. Just proof read it fast and you should be good. :) My heart was racing with nerves and ...

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Cole’s hand caught mine, and he didn’t let go. I knew this was the plan. Show him, and everyone around us, that he had me. I was his, at least ...

The smell of alcohol on his breath was one sign that he had drank quite enough; his behavior was another one. The wall was supporting him, a hand carelessly gripping ...

Hello there. :) Let's make this review, since I've been complaining that it has been a long time, it wouldn't be fair if I would take my time. ;) By ...

Hello there.:) I'm not the best when it comes to poetry, so who am I to review this? But I'll still try to do my best and give you advice ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. I wanted to tell you all that time , that I ...

Hello there. :) Her drawings comma, her lovely almost perfect drawings swirled. He turned to tell the man that they didn't except American money but the man had jumped out ...

Hello there. :) I'll quote the whole thing so it's easier for me to correct, and for you to see as a whole. the corrections will be in red, and ...

Hello there. :) It's me again, so you should know how I do my reviews. ;) The other, North St H igh was government run and although successful in music, ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on the review. Fingers assaulted by the cold, he turned the lock comma, hearing ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with a few nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on this chapter. Just calm down. You’re fine…he didn’t do anything. He was ...