theotherone

Hello there, I'm here for a review as requested. :) I'll begin with the nipticks, and then go on with my overall impression. In bold are the comments, in red, ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! :)

Hello there. :) Violetta Valéry was a role that every girl at the opera wished to play. I was, luckily, part of the talented singers that were going to have ...

Hello there. :) Shall I begin with grammar? I shook my head comma “No period. " It should be the other way around. I nodded comma relieved I could get ...

Hello Rob. :) He is angry, enraged ! The only things he can think of are the things he will say to her . The things he will do to ...

Hello there. :) I really like the picture, and I feel like you captured the light just right. When I looked at it, I almost have to squint because I ...

Hello there. :) First, I'll begin with a nitpick... Yes, just one. ;) Or maybe two. And so I do so , leaning over the grimy seats to give him ...

Hello there. :) Still no link? I'm not sure if it's jus me, or if it actually doesn't work. Just wanted to let you know, since you seem to be ...

Kat, your review is done. :) Anyone else who wants to give me a little work?

Hello there, I'm here as requested! :) I like this poem, and the imagery is great, but I find that the flow is a little bit awkward. I'll try to ...

Hello there. :) 1. Lighting is awesome, and really sets a mood. I'm not sure what kind of photography exhibit you want to participate in, but in my opinion, this ...

Hello there. :) First stanza was good, and I loved it. It sets the mood, and gets the reader interested in the story. And you pushed me away, Pushed me ...

Kafka- review is done! Loller- Done as well. Thanks for the work guys. Is there anyone else? :)

Hello, I'm here as requested. :) Wow, this was pretty good. At first, I wasn't sure where it was going, but the ending was great, and explained it all, so ...

Hello, I'm here as requested! This is some poem you've got. :) I have to be honest, and say I wasn't kind of confused at first, because I wasn't sure ...