theotherone

Hey, I'm here again to review chapter two! :) I'll quote the whole thing so it's easier to correct your mistakes. :) Author's Note: This isn't the most eventful chapter ...

This is a very short story inspired by a song called Remembering Sunday by All Time Low. I was thinking about putting more, but I'm lost of ideas on what ...

Hello there. :) I'll quote the whole thing so I can comment and show grammatical mistakes at the same time. :) So red for corrections and bold for comments. If ...

Hello there. :) First off, I would like to point out that this is a pretty good picture. :) Like everyone said above, the background is a little weird. It ...

Hello there. :) I tried not to think I still needed him to after six and a half months of this. I couldn't deny though that I wanted him to ...

Hello there. :) Aw, it brings back memories... I did that two in art class, but we had only one color to demonstrate part that were illuminated by the light ...

Hello there. :) So let me begin by saying that if I'm harsh, I'm sorry. It's not my intention, and I'm only trying to give up constructive criticism. :) First ...

Hello there. :) My dad felt having money didn’t mean we needed everything new. Yet, I couldn’t see this when she was talking about . Still, every night as I ...

Spot is reserved for the rest of my review. :) -Other One

Hello there. :) I'm going to make a review chapter by chapter. If there's nothing written about one, it's just that I have nothing to say. :) Chapter One- staring ...

Hello there. :) Hot breath on the base of my neck sent shivers through every nerve. Time seemed to have stopped. My life would never had ended this way, but ...

Here is one of my paintings that I haven't finish yet. I will have time to work on it this week, and this is exactly why I'm posting in here. ...

Hello there. :) First off, you should definitely have more faith in your work. It's really not that bad, and I actually like the way you did it, it gives ...

Hello Allie. I'm here for another review! Red is the corrections, and bold are the comments. Sentences that are in red AND bold... It means that there will be a ...

Hello there. :) Incredible story you've got there. The mystery of the dream just keeps the reader guessing until the end, and I was mad when in the end she ...