theotherone

Hello there, I'm here as requested! I really liked this poem. The imagery was awesome, and the way you wrote it... Well, it's pretty good. ;) I don't have any ...

Hello Dudette, I'm here for another review. :) I didn't think I found any nitpicks in this chapter. There's the transitions again, they could be a little more slick, but ...

Smiley! Review is done as well. :) Who's next?

Hello Smiley, I'm here as requested! First off, I want to point out the weird way you've separated this poem... Or maybe not separated but spaced? I'm not sure how ...

Thanks, I know another place where they have skirts like that too :) But if I come across a Hot Topic, I'll make sure I check for something like yours. ...

Dudette, your review is completed! Anyone else has any work for me? I'm ready to tackle it. ;)

Hello Dudette, I'm here as requested! :) I still blamed the way my heart was hammering through my chest like it was going to explode, though. “He is so fit!” ...

Well, in my photo... Yellow dress is Other, and purple top is Truth. But they were taken at the same time, so it's like that for both of our pictures. ...

Hey Celtica! I don't know if you're okay with romantic short stories... I have one, if you can, indeed, review them. :D Here's the link -----> Thanks! -Other One

Rasca, your review is done as well! Hope it helped :) Somebody in need of a review?

Hello there, I'm here as requested! So I'll begin with corrections and then go on with my overall impression. He stayed in Uterus for a whole nine months, but when ...

I'm going to put a picture of Truth and me, since we are twins. ;) sweet 16 005 YWS.jpg And a picture of just me. 's mobile 023 YWS.jpg

Hello there. :) First off, everyone already told you about the lines, so I won't say a long paragraph about it. Humans are in three dimension, right? Therefore, they are ...

teen writer, your review is done. :) Well... Is there anyone else that wants a review?

Hello there. :) I'm here as requested! I'll begin with grammar, and then give my overall impression on your plot. Corrections are in red, comments are in bold. if there's ...