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A drawing and a painting I've made recently. Please comment. :) jumping off swings.jpg This drawing is the cover of a book called Jumping Off Swings. I normally draw pictures ...

Granted, but you forgot it in the bus and someone stole it. I wish it could stop raining.

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then proceed to say my overall impression on your story. He had a way about him that I showed he had ...

Hello there. :) I'm not one to get jealous of those girls that wear a ton of makeup and have every boy in the school after her , but when ...

Hello Chrisila! I'm glad you found YWS and I'm sure it's exactly what you need. :) Writing tends to obsesses us, writers. And characters... They also seem to follow me ...

Hello there. :) Chapter 1: It`s Time `` Come on Kesha!``, Tristian said , as , he was trying to kiss his girlfriend , that he has been with for ...

Hello there. :) First, SmylinG already pointed out pretty much every grammar related mistake I found, so I won't point them out a second time. Just make sure you do ...

Hello there. :) First off, I want to say that these are pretty good, although I might say it a lot in the review... :P 1- I really like this, ...

We had to go to the mall this afternoon and that meant leaving the house and the guys. They haven’t left the basement since morning and the only time I ...

Hello there. :) Regardless of the strange kiss we had, that night was the night that cemented our relationship on its own personal pedestal. In my eyes it was like ...

Hello Alz :) So, this is a poem I posted a while ago, and everyone told me to write a little more. So I did, but nobody gave me feed ...

Hello there. :) Thank God Lea and Charlie's mother, Nicki comma, were there to help with her. Stephen and Lea's boyfriend comma, Pablo comma, were helping him figure out what ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then I'll go on with my overall impression on your story. Running out of school gates and throwing your year thirteen ...

Hello there, I'm here for another review! :) You know how I work, right? ;) ‘Retro shack’ doesn’t have uniforms except the apron, so employees could wear their own clothes. ...

Hello there. :) I liked this story as well. I only saw minor mistakes, like comma's, so I didn't correct them. Just read it out loud, which will probably hint ...