theotherone

Anyone else need some reviews? I'm back and ready for it! ;)

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with characters and plot. Running along it comma, I heard him calling after me, asking me to stop ...

The week promised to be long and tedious. It was the last push before the exams and we all knew that after the few painful weeks we had left, there ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested! It made me feel so boring in my pantsuit and plain pointed-toe high heels. I wanted to ask her how she got her scar, ...

Hello there, it's me again! :) And I'm back with nitpicks. ;) She was annoyed that I was missing the chance to hang out with Brandon but I texted her ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested! I'm a little late, but at least I'm here. ;) “Have a late night last night?” Shouldn't it be had ? I'm sorry for ...

Hello, it's me again. ;) So I didn't find any nitpicks, I think IcyFlame picked them all out. The story is good. Is this the final chapter? I feel like ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. At first I'm confused and then I realise she's making a ...

Hello Dudette! You know how I work by now... So I'll begin. :) So far this lesson comma, I’d barely managed to answer any of the questions that had been ...

Hello there. :) I like the drawing. I don't think I have a favorite part, since the entire thing is epic. The bird at the top right-hand corner is awesome. ...

Hello there. :) I didn't find any nitpicks for you, which is good. ;) The plot was good, but the way you introduced it could be worked on. You seem ...

Hello there. :) This is a great beginning, but it was confusing. The use of he and she isn't helping much. I think you should actually put names so we ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. I go to sleep every night in my single bed and ...

Hello there. :) I don't know if you've got a lot of nitpicks to do, but I'm still going to quote it all so it's easier for you to correct. ...

I re-wrote the story, it's called Eyes of A Stranger... Check it out! People were jumping around, pushing, sweating. They were screaming in unison, and I could barely make out ...