theotherone

I always picture the scene in my head, imagine the guy before me, touching and kissing me. I write what I feel afterwards, and add some details about how the ...

Hello Polinkacreations, your review is done, hope it helps! :) Is anyone up for a review from me?

Hello there. :) I am so sorry for what happened to you. I don't know what it feels like to loose someone so suddenly and not have time to say ...

Hello there. :) This is really well done. First off, I noticed the lines were really rough and present in the drawing, which brings out a different side of it ...

Hello there. :) This is really well done, and I love the little details you've done with the pencil. When I draw, I normally go more with shadows and smudges ...

Hello Micheal :) This post was... beautiful. Normally when people post here they don't really tell much, but I feel like I already know you from what you wrote, and ...

Hello there. I'm here to review your poem as requested. :) Here's pretty much the only nitpick I found that hasn't been mentioned Because our love no longer lives, I ...

Hello there. :) Another flawless chapter... It's getting pretty intense in there. I really liked the part where she dances, you did a really good job at making us feeling ...

Your review is done, Devan. :) Anyone else?

Hello there, I'm here as requested. Sorry for the wait, I'm just busy these days. So here we go with the review. :) First off, the flow was good, even ...

Hello there. :) Her face darkened. “I love what you’re doing with your hair these days. It’s called ‘the air head look’ isn’t it?” Is it Aiden's words or Cassie's? ...

Hello there. :) I found a few mistakes, which Cailey pointed out. Please review and correct them. :) The story itself was really short and I would like to see ...

Hello :) Hope you'll enjoy it here. It's actually the best place to practice writing and develop your style. The best way to get reviewed is to review yourself, so ...

Hello there. :) Like Disenchanted, I feel like the format isn't the best to present your story. It's overwhelming at first, and too much for the eyes. It is probably ...

Hello there. :) These pictures are really beautiful. 1. I really like the 'black' one that stands out. I believe this is why you took the picture of those ones ...