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  • Will Review For Food
    Re: The Other Reviewer. :)

    Written In Stone, it's done! So... Will someone ask for another review? :)

    Jan 10, 2012


  • Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) I want to state that I'm not the greatest with poetry, but I'll try my best. drifting softly in the breeze. I think ...

    Jan 10, 2012

  • Welcome Mat
    Re: Hello!!!!

    Hello Alucard. :) Hopefully, you are enjoying it here, even though it seems you've been here for quite a while... A month or so? You'll see that sharing your works ...

    Jan 8, 2012


  • Hey Lizzie, this is not quite the thread you should be writing in if you want to search for someone that can help you. It's more of a thread where ...

    Jan 8, 2012

  • Will Review For Food
    Re: The Other Reviewer. :)

    Alphonso Fernandez, your review is done. :) Sorry it took me so much time. Anyone else up for a review?

    Jan 7, 2012


  • Hello again. :) Mistakes. I regretted it much. I shouldn't have come in the first place. It had been because of the king's son, who's name was Frederick, an old ...

    Jan 7, 2012


  • Hello there, I'm here to review as requested! :) I'm so sorry about the time it took me to do it, but with all the changes in YWS, now I ...

    Jan 7, 2012


  • Hello there. :) I see that Hockey Fan has pointed out quite a few things concerning the story, so I apologize in advance if I repeat some of it myself. ...

    Jan 7, 2012

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Tara's Story

    Hello there. :) Normally, I begin my reviews with all the nitpicks I found, but it seems that Hockey Fan already got most of them. Therefore, I'll try to do ...

    Jan 6, 2012


  • Hello there. :) These pictures are absolutely awesome. I might not go one by one because there's really nothing to say apart from their prettiness. But, I will say my ...

    Dec 31, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Mysticality

    Hello there. :) This was a great story and I can totally relate to it, since I created myself the perfect guy in my dreams when I was young. Really ...

    Dec 19, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Maia

    Hello there. :) I'm here to review, so I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on the story. I never knew if she realized ...

    Dec 19, 2011


  • Hello there. :) I'm here to review, of course. So here we go. His gaze swept over the length of my body and a chill ran up my spine. This ...

    Dec 12, 2011

  • Romantic Novels
    Re: Fakebook- Introduction

    Hello there, I'm here to review as requested. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks, and then move on with my overall impression on your story. I wheeled around to find ...

    Dec 4, 2011


  • Awesome chapter, as usual. Wow, Please write the other one really fast. Like right now? :) Plot wise, this is great. I love the sexual tension between these two. We ...

    Nov 28, 2011


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