thembigoleyes

Thanks for all your help! I appreciate it. Hopefully, I'll be able to get moving on this one and get past chapter 12...

1 “BABY, TAKE THIS. IT’LL MAKE OUR NIGHT A LOT MORE fun, I promise,” Johnny says as he passes me a handful of pills. I look at my boyfriend’s face, ...

Obviously, you need to work on sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar in general. Your chapter, as it's called, doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. Who is this ...

I read through the first prologue that you had stricken out and I agree with the others posting that it doesn't really give you a feel for the story. I ...

The main character inthe book I am writing is a heroin addict (among other things) and she eventually overdoses on it. My problem is that I've never done heroin, quite ...

Obviously I'm new here. My name is Shawna and I'm currently working on two different books. I'm pretty much stck on one, though I know where I want it to ...