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Re: Losing My Mind
The general flow of the poem was good, although I would work on the rhyming scheme as I felt it was a bit choppy at times. I can't really get ...
Apr 20, 2009
The general flow of the poem was good, although I would work on the rhyming scheme as I felt it was a bit choppy at times. I can't really get ...
Apr 20, 2009