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Re: Losing My Mind
The general flow of the poem was good, although I would work on the rhyming scheme as I felt it was a bit choppy at times. I can't really get ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: The Dark Side of the Gla/Morous Streets of Reality
AUTHOR's NOTE: SORRY FOR THE FORMAT/STRUCTURE; LINES BREAKS WE'RE MESSED UP. SEE ATTACHMENT, IF YOU WANT, FOR CORRECT STRUCTURE! PROLOGUE “My name is Damien. That is all you need to ...
Apr 20, 2009