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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Thank you Zerkk! :smt003 *and Blue Rubies =P

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Could you guys point out some of the exact errors in a couple lines? I'm afraid that I just don't get what I did wrong, and I'd like to know ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Thoughts of a Silent Romantic As time draws on, we older grow and part, Our tired lives still fail to link as one, And schisms occur in my lonely heart. ...

    Nov 2, 2009


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