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thehumanroach

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Thank you Zerkk! :smt003 *and Blue Rubies =P

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Could you guys point out some of the exact errors in a couple lines? I'm afraid that I just don't get what I did wrong, and I'd like to know ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My First Attempt at a Sonnet

    Thoughts of a Silent Romantic As time draws on, we older grow and part, Our tired lives still fail to link as one, And schisms occur in my lonely heart. ...

    Nov 2, 2009


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee