thehobbitgangster

Bobby Joe Corn Jr. I think I'd just feel sorry for a character that was named this.

Hola! Just a quick note to better understand the lyrics. This was a project for school and it's for a A Tale of Two Cities form Madame Defarge's perspective. Thanks. ...

I agree that this would be much easier to critique for you if you show where the verses begin/end. When I first read through I just thought the chorus was ...

Thanks! I'll have to check some of these out! Right now, I'm mainly listening to Hans Zimmer's stuff. The song Davy Jones by him is amazing! Also Batman's The Dark ...

I'll have to give you a 7/10 for the song kryptonite. 1.Remember the Name (Fort Minor) 2. Tik Tok (Ke$ha) 3.Love Today (Mika) 4.I Don't Want to Be (Gavin Degraw) ...

Haha I think the shrimp one is hilarious! Well done! :)

Haha! Those were great! My favorite was definitely the third one! The only line that bothered me out of all of them was the second in Edward's limerick. I don't ...

fly at the speed of light to...

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cardinal

This song was great! I don't think it was too short, I guess you could've added a bridge too make it longer, but it wouldn't be necessary. I love the ...

eh, kind of funny. I'll give it a 7/10

lens

9/10. The slushie reminds me of the summer! Which then reminds me how much school is left, before summer... Oh, well.:)

I really liked the emotion that you portrayed in this song. It could be a great slow pop song. Or it could be fast, whichever way you feel like it. ...