thehobbitgangster

Hola! So the last stanza was definitely my favorite. It had the best rhymes to me and also flowed really well. It also felt like it had the most feeling ...

Hola! So I just have a quick things to say. Firstly, I like how you gave the genre of this song and also how you demonstrated how you opened the ...

A princess who lives far in the north and reigns over her kingdom with the help of snow flurry magic and little snow dwarfs.

Hola! So I've seen a few nerd parodies on the site and I thought I would contribute.This is a parody of the song Rockstar by Nickelback. Just thought I'd let ...

Hola!! So, I definitely agree that your chorus needs a smidge of work. Either decide whether or not you want to keep the rhyme scheme. I recommend one, because it ...

Hola, so this is a good intro. First off, I definitely see this more as a script for a movie versus a play. It could almost be like a scripted ...

Um, well I wrote a rap in 8th grade describing Bilbo's adventure in the Hobbit and I thought it was pretty gangster. Thus the hobbit gangster.

These lyrics really got my attention because of the title and it was very well done. When reading it, I got a rap feel about it. I could imagine it ...

"The Day the Sun Didn't Show Up" is a sci-fi post-apocalyptic story about three teens who have to convince their small town to work together to help make it prosperous ...

Lil Wayne's voice annoys me a bit. Too many people auto-tune nowadays.

Well, I had to read classic novels in my English class and here are a few titles from the list: The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis A Connecticut Yankee in ...

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Cool lyrics, not so much a fan of the song though. But it was a cool vid so 6/10

That was a pretty awesome intro combined with raging lyrics so I'll give it a 9/10.

Hola!!! Before I say anything else, I'd just like to point out that the way that the text is so bunched is a little hard on the eyes and a ...