thehobbitgangster

Granted, but one day the super computer displays the blue screen of death and therefore all humans in the world die out due to not remembering how to take decent ...

This was a really sweet poem. I actually liked the last line because I thought it was funny. I didn't know if you were trying to be serious or making ...

Hello there! Firstly, these lyrics work very well. I can imagine them to a pop ballad, maybe even with a little country twang. I just have a couple nit-picky type ...

This poem was a lot different than I expected from the title. I was suspecting dark and scary, but was pleasantly surprised with whimsical and nice. It was very imaginative ...

Aaargh!!! Decisions, decisions... Oh well, probably the movies. Would you rather have your fingernails be pulled off slowly one by one or have to where a hand-puppet on your right ...

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10/10 definitely would pull me in. Dawn rose above the city of Varkian and with it climbed pillars of smoke and steam protruding from various rooftops.

So, I had to read through this poem a couple times because there was so much in it. It confused me at first, but I think I got it in ...

Hola! I agree that this poem does get a bit lengthy especially at the end. So, the second line of the poem seemed a little awkwardly worded to me. To ...

Hola! So I do believe you chose a very appropriate genre for this song. The whole goth ballad idea works well with the lyrics and their tone. Anyways, firstly I ...

balloons

Hello there! My first thought on this piece was that it seemed to be more of a poem rather than song lyrics. It just seems a little short is all ...

dare you to move by switchfoot. I love this song and it inspires me to always get back up when I fall.

sorry, I'm going to have to give you a 5/10 for some bad grammar and the colors. Is this a song? Nice idea though.

Hola! These lyrics had a very nice flow to them and the rhyme scheme was solid the whole way through. Just try to punctuate and capitalize in the correct places ...