thehobbitgangster

Chemistry. My first class of the day. I sit down in my normal seat. It's funny how even though we don't have assigned seats in that class, that everybody sits ...

To call someone a foot-licker. This is simply because I can't think of anything more disgusting than someone who licks feet. "Aaargh! You dirty foot-licker!"

Oh my gosh... This poem gave me the shivers but at the same time I was compelled to read more. Really awesome job!

This is a pretty good start. I could really see this as a movie script. It does seem like this story could go in many directions so I am excited ...

Thanks to all!!! I tried to think of a clever title for this poem, but was having a hard time thinking one up. I really did want the ending to ...

Wow, what an introduction!!! This story sounds really suspenseful and I can't wait to read more!! My one critique is the amount of writing that is dedicated to Kailyn's outfit ...

I have to agree that the imagery in this piece is wonderful. The images of Atticus dancing in the rain were amazing!!! Really good job!!!!

These were great comparisons of showing the different sides of people's beliefs. It seems like sometimes inside of one person both beliefs are present. (maybe that's why the poems were ...

I saw it ahead of me. That light It called to me like a lighthouse is a bright light to ships in the deep blackness of night. In the pit ...