thehobbitgangster

This poem had a dark sort of humor to it and made me sad a little when thinking about the poor little grandmother alone on Christmas. The whole part of ...

I have to agree that it is great to read a poem on here that is not entirely serious and moody, but I believe this poem does have a certain ...

10/10 for colorful words and powerfulness

Man, those peeps sound so good!! Good job! This describes exactly how I feel every time I pass peeps in the store! Definitely awesome!!

This sounds like it's going to be a good story! My issues with it are how short some of the sentences are right in a row. It feels sort of ...

This was a really cool idea to write about and you did a very nice job with it. The only thing I had trouble with was following with what was ...

Oh man, this is a tough question. I would have to say Hey Soul Sister by Train for the ukulele bits!!!!! Or anything by Mika!

Oh thanks!!

My nemesis, I found him. Or rather he surprised me. It was the reflective surface that gave him away really. Staring him down, I waited for just the right moment. ...

I know the person who invented the orange netting that oranges are packaged in. Yep...

This was a pretty good poem. The only problems I saw with it were a few punctuation problems. For example the whole future, present, and past line. I don't know ...

er sorry if this was a little confusing. I wasn't actually talking about butterflies as in insects, but butterflies as in people who swim the butterfly in swimming. Hope that ...

Their Batman spoofs are amazing!! I love the Joker in their videos! It's amazing how they write the script and how long their videos are considering how awesomely funny they ...

The butterflies, they skim across the water so quickly. Hardly ever stopping to catch their breath. Heads nodding wildly they gain momentum until they hit the wall and bounce off. ...

That was really amazing for a twelve year old! I really must give you props for that! I really like this piece because I can picture everything so vividly. I ...