thehobbitgangster

I agree with sealegs and crescent. This seems to be an awesome ending for a dramatic song. Maybe for the beginning you can write how each character is feeling, you ...

something awesome: cool, sweet, beast, boss, major if stubbed toes: fiddlesticks, tartar sauce, crab snacks if i got in an argument with someone, I'd have to call them a lint-licker ...

Hello there! So I have just a few thoughts on this piece. Firstly, in the first stanza where you say satin's i think you were trying to mean Satan, like ...

I love math and puzzles, so I definitely would like to either work for the CIA/FBI or be a mathematician. Or a marine biologist. Decisions, decisions...

Hi! So I really like your song. It was so creative. I think it's really cool that you wrote about a zombie attack because it seems like so many songs ...

Thank you all for such positive comments!! I really appreciate the feedback. By the way if you do want to hear what it sounds like, I have put a video ...

these are so awesome!! They look like conceptual drawings for some sweet graphic novel or animated movie. My favorite was the general. He had such an expressive face. Sometimes I ...

Hi!! So I have only one tiny problem with this poem and that is that some parts rhyme and some do not. I just recommend that you stick with one ...

Woke me up this morning feeling like a pirate grab my eye-patch and my sword, I’m gonna rock this island Up on deck, that’s where I strut with plenty of ...

This was really great. There are so many hidden messages in Alice in Wonderland and I think you pretty much summed them up in one poem. Good job!

thanks to everybody who took the time to read this! I like to write parodies and I'm thinking about posting more soon!

thank you!

Yep, I was just wondering how the featured works are chosen. Anyone know? Thanks!

This was very pretty. It sort of reminds me of Yeats' poetry a little bit. I agree that some of the rhyme scheme seems a bit off along with the ...

Good: the dancing pink elephant made me laugh Bad: I laughed uncontrollably all through class Worse: I got detention for laughing uncontrollably during a video of Lewis and Clark. situation: ...