thehobbitgangster

Firstly, I thought this poem had very vivid imagery. Specifically the bits related to the saltwater tears were very good. My favorite part of the poem was the very last ...

I agree that this poem developed an interesting pattern. Nitpicks: in line one, "fariytale" should be fairytale. in the second line from the end, "Romance is a undefined force" should ...

trek

This was so moving and beautiful. I especially liked the lines, "As I lay my broken heart to sleep, I prayed your life would be yours to keep." Those lines ...

Overall good job! I really enjoyed the chorus, really because of the awesome rhyme that was "not trying to own" and "toblerone". Speaking of rhymes some didn't go amazingly well ...

I just personally love soundtracks especially Pirates of the Caribbean and Batman and was just wondering if any one else had suggestions.

Whew, that was pretty suspenseful. My only suggestions, aside from a few typos, is that you separate the humongous paragraphs a little. Makes it a smidgeon easier to read, so ...

This story really did seem to start fast and got faster as it went along. Because the whole beginning seemed so much like a scene from Aladdin I got a ...

glee

So, I really liked the whole theme of the forest in these lyrics. The one line I didn't understand was at the very end of verse 1. Where did the ...

You could probably post the play in the scripts section!

hey thanks again to everyone for reading this piece! I'm currently filming a music video for it. @spike71294, walking the plank is just way for suspenseful. :) By the way ...

Ha! I loved Dumbledore's line "Yes, I do go by that name." I thoroughly enjoyed your interpretation of what happened!!

isolated

Em, fantastic music. 10/10