thegirlwhofateloves

that's a lot better and i do like it this time! thanks for the translation - honestly, for someone who got a b in gcse spanish i know noooooothing!!! x ...

I don't suggest you test that theory!

No it's just about me...and yes, what I want...kind of...

hell yes they are! But I don't suggest you go out and murder someone right now. Apart from the fact that you'd get a very long spell in jail (well, ...

I'm not sure...I'm really not! Genuinely - I really can't make up my mind if I like it or not! como tu quieres la vida? -what does that mean?!

Guess I see your point Griffinkeeper...kind of. I mean they need underlying structure, but what I meant was that words can kind of be all over the place...if you get ...

Chapped lips Chalk dreams Tiny capsuals Are my relief If you know what I mean Pick a star Swallow that pill And fall to the floor Hide your heart Kill ...

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:lol: that's really quite amusing. Have to admit, not sure on the beginning, but as you go on it's actually quite good. As long as you're being ironic which I'll ...

A face against a screen of Pale glass, dotted with sweat. In a dream that's true But devoid of reality. The long, pale fingers that scrape Down my back Through ...

I know what you mean. I swear a lot (!) but not very often in my poems, because it mainly just deflects from the real point of the poem. Only ...

Nefer, what do you mean, you won't/can't write anymore?! Incandescence, you obviously didn't get what i meant!

I totally do NOT agree! Poetry doesn't have to be structured, it doesn't need rhyme. The only thing I agree with is that a poem has rhythm, but that is ...

Too many blows and flows.

Like it. Needs a bit of tweaking maybe, but I like the innocence. BUT to make the so-called innocence more effective, I think you need to make the overall poem ...